This is our lyric sheet, I annotated over the lyrics and what scene goes where, Sharon (my teammate) gave me ideas and feedback.
This is the first draft of our lyric sheet before I talked to our teacher to see if there were any improvements.
Here is the second and final draft for the lyric sheet. I talked to our teacher about what he could suggest to add or improve on, here are the suggestions
- make the ex boyfriend's new girlfriend's face always hidden (camera always behind her/facing away) to pull all the focus towards the boy to emphasis that their break up was always his fault and that the new girl is just salt added to the wound
- before the music video starts (10-15 seconds) show Hannah (the main character/artist) going through a box of old memories from her time with the ex boyfriend (old hoodies, plushies, pictures, love letters) at the beginning in the beach
Extra Note(s)
- The "couples" list off to the left is a list of couples and other friends we have asked/considered to be side actors in our music video
Self Reflection:
I did the lyric sheet, it originally started off with Sharon also apart of making this but then we decided to divide and conquer and whilst I was making the lyric sheet she was finalizing the mood board and researches. It took a few trials and error to figure out how I wanted this to play out, I'm glad the ideas I got weren't similar to the original music video (back on our first media storyboard project, I had accidentally made my storyboard play out all too similar to the original video I used as a referenced) and I didn't struggle too bad when making this as I was naturally just an imaginative person and since this music video was set in high school, I threw in high school student experiences that me or my friends have gone through. Writing about how the character had felt going through a breakup, falling behind in school, and feeling alone was felt on a personal level that I think a lot of other students mutually feel.
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